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This was excellently done, Easily as good as any of the Phoenix Wrong Flashes that populate this site, in fact I wouldn't be surprised if this was placed in that collection. I liked the fact that your choices for sound were not "Main stream" as it were, and were slightly harder to recognize, also, good work on the animation that fit mouths and the like , overall really good, I hope to see more of your work, not only in this arena but on new gorunds general.
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Well done!
Your sound choices were very very good, and were original too which helped a lot, your sprites had a few layering issues, not to mention that they frequently cut off where the edge of the DS screen would be, in future try using those as a guideline for where to place the sprites. I really liked the way you used the different languages of "Objection" it was a good solution to what could have been over used.
A SOLID Base, and a great spring board.
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I like the Pheonix Wrong series, and as such, I have to say that this effort, is while good, average in the scheme of things, your sprites were distorted, and moved around during scenes, sometimes (like the chef) they cut off before reaching the top of the screen. Also I could have sworn that Numa and Milkshake had been done before. the "Extreme close up" was awesome. but I would have pushed into the close up of just their eyes for the second one.
Don't take this as all negative, there was a lot of promise here.However, I don't know anything about flash, and haven't done better, so well done on even submitting.
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to make such an informative review. Now I will make an informative respond.
I didn't know what happened with the bumping until this morning when I looked over the animation. I fixed it and updated it just a second ago, check it out. (I also fixed the pixelation by changing the movie size.)
The chef's hat being cut off was unfortunate, but I thought I'd be able to get away with it...DAMN YOUR PERCEPTIVE EYE! lol
I know Numa has already been done, but they didn't do the chorus, so I decided to pick it up. Milkshake...I don't know, I just had to do it!
Well, thanks for your time and look out for my next one, it should be alot better and longer!
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